The morning rays of the Sun cling
On the upper bow of the Rainbow
Emerge after a moment ‘s dusk
Brown Pelicans and Western Gulls
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Red, orange, yellow Life and love bestows Green, blue, indigo Ships of love embargo Engaged for passion.. very imaginative. full of different images.. rainbow thread... thank u. tony
Rainbow is explained in beautiful lines. Very good poem.
Over the Rainbow... a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.
As I walk along the white beach Looking at the sea, the blue waters Dance its way towards the golden sand Shy away from the smiling horizon I like this part. It is very tender.
nice poem.first poem of yrs tht i read reall good, i must say well done keep it up!
a labelled, bang right on you 10/10 it is a brilliant poem :)
From: Kevin Webster (otego United States; Male; 15) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 8/25/2009 4: 33: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: over the rainbow your peom was great i thought it was peaceful in a diffenert way ^_^ your friend kevin webster
Can I be honest? You asked me to comment on this poem so I will.. It isnt necessarily poorly written, but it seriously lacks originality and authentic voice. I didn't hate this poem, but it sure does feel like ive read it several times before
Hello there, I just read your poem over the rainbow. i especially like the lase verse, so many adjectives, it's great! You8 should read my poems and leave comments. Thanks a lot.
Lovely imagery captured in this well written poem. Great job! Anna
love reading it and I love it too