Thursday, August 6, 2009

Over The Rainbow Comments

Rating: 4.7

The morning rays of the Sun cling
On the upper bow of the Rainbow
Emerge after a moment ‘s dusk
Brown Pelicans and Western Gulls
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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rainbow 11 January 2019

love reading it and I love it too

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 August 2018

Red, orange, yellow Life and love bestows Green, blue, indigo Ships of love embargo Engaged for passion.. very imaginative. full of different images.. rainbow thread... thank u. tony

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Haidee Majola 28 July 2018

Delightful read. Imaginative.👍

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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath 29 April 2018

Rainbow is explained in beautiful lines. Very good poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 October 2017

very very nce rainbows poetry u share

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Jeanette Telusma 06 October 2017

Over the Rainbow... a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 31 July 2015

A romantic poem like the Keat's and Wordsworth's.

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Saeid Hadavand 12 November 2009

As I walk along the white beach Looking at the sea, the blue waters Dance its way towards the golden sand Shy away from the smiling horizon I like this part. It is very tender.

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Magali Rodriguez 15 September 2009

nice poem.first poem of yrs tht i read reall good, i must say well done keep it up!

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Julius Luke Victorio 09 September 2009

a labelled, bang right on you 10/10 it is a brilliant poem :)

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Alfred Trevor 06 September 2009

nice poem I love it 10

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DELETED NOW 31 August 2009

if you follow a rainbow you; re gonna go in a circle.

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Hamid Kareem 27 August 2009

yet a very beautiful poem from you again... have to vote it

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 August 2009

From: Kevin Webster (otego United States; Male; 15) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 8/25/2009 4: 33: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: over the rainbow your peom was great i thought it was peaceful in a diffenert way ^_^ your friend kevin webster

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Adam Holmes 25 August 2009

Can I be honest? You asked me to comment on this poem so I will.. It isnt necessarily poorly written, but it seriously lacks originality and authentic voice. I didn't hate this poem, but it sure does feel like ive read it several times before

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Gregory Bova 23 August 2009

great write if i could i would give it an 11 lol

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Jessica Fellows 22 August 2009

Hello there, I just read your poem over the rainbow. i especially like the lase verse, so many adjectives, it's great! You8 should read my poems and leave comments. Thanks a lot.

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Hanson Chen 22 August 2009

It's....breathtaking, in a good way.

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Annabel Sheila 19 August 2009

Lovely imagery captured in this well written poem. Great job! Anna

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Shauna Joyner 18 August 2009

really colorful beautiful to

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