Friday, April 30, 2021

Over The Rainbow Comments

Rating: 4.5

Some days I feel like a leprechaun at the end
On other days I feel like the one in search for the gold at the beginning.
Through restless nights and sleeping days.
Through cold lava and flaming snow.
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Devonte Manusina
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M Asim Nehal 15 August 2021

A poem with full feelings. I liked reading it. Full Stars *****

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 May 2021

Such a nice start, Devonte. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 May 2021

Such a nice poem, Devonte. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Indira Renganathan 11 May 2021

'A voice not of any words but of just understanding. I love you.'.... so lovely and inspiring...5*****

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Benjamin Chiu Uy 06 May 2021

Deserves an AAA ratings, l liked it,

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Lyn Paul 04 May 2021

Congratulations for this is an amazing poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 May 2021

A brilliant poem for sure. Truly amazing development in the poem. Bravo dear poetess! Keep the ink wet and the hand flowing. Welcome to PoetryLand!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 May 2021

Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day with the very first poem Over The Rainbow. I am honestly very impressed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 May 2021

A child with a shroud of darkness consumed and lost. I stare at the flailing light only to see my own reflection of a bright but dim light. I move closer to the blinding light. Shroud slowly despising. A voice not of any words but of just understanding. I love you.

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