Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Over The Line Comments

Rating: 3.9

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Quin Faas
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Chris Mendros 20 October 2009

took a little while to get into, but it all came together after a while. Strongly worded, defiant expression of outrage, transcending victimization.

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Elemchos Kratoz 20 October 2009

good at sametime exceptional God bless Quin Faith

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trop pour trop peu 19 October 2009

the sharpness is very efficient

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 19 October 2009

Nice cathartic poem........a good write............

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Jerry Hughes 19 October 2009

.........ye gods, this is exceptional Quin, terrifyingly so! Take care, love, Jerry

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Jericho Jak 18 October 2009

For me it was like watching a film unfold in a series of Kodak instant photos flipped onto a desk - it hurt to continue reading but I couldn't stop. Thank you for writing this.

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Philip Winchester 11 October 2009

It`s a Bad Experience, What can I say, you know that, You do not need to be told to 'Pull Yourself Together' You cannot bear to hear again the words 'Get Over It' It is a Fact of Life, You have made up your mind, just a Fact, A Fact. Now it`s on paper, on file, in Cyber Space....for the Gods to see and Judge. You being a Woman have the Toughest Roles to Play, The worsts Tests to Endure. Treat this as such, You Pass with flying Colors.In my Book you Do. You have a Friend here Who Love you without Condition and no Axe to Grind. Or am I taking this Poem Too far over the Line. I still gave it 10 My Kindest Regards. Philip

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Spiritwind Wood 09 October 2009

all im saying on this is...WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! you kept me over the line!

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Theodora Onken 07 October 2009

Quin, It is obvious that you are a victim. You were assaulted. By a stalker? Or stalkers? Brutally? Raped? ? ? Became pregnant from that rape? Your pain is bleeding all over this page. Am a Victims Rights Activist. That covers victims of any abuse. You need to see a counselor and you need to get someone to listen to you before you can even begin to heal. Writing about it is cathartic but it is not going to make this horrible wrong go away. Trust me, there will always be the scars. You must learn to deal with them. You are here crying out. You need to also go back to the police. If you know your attacker or attackers...Stalker or stalkers, your D.A needs to know.! NOW! Because they are free and they will do it again and again and again. Rape is done by sociopaths...it is a hate crime and a most egrigious violent crime (secretly hate women) and a power play! Theo

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