Sunday, January 25, 2015

Over Smart Comments

Rating: 5.0

You come out on the road with a veil on your face,
You naughty beloved I can feel your grace!
Sometimes it's brown, sometimes it's black,
Sometimes it's dense, sometimes with a crack,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Salini Nair 03 February 2015

I am proud I love a living sweetheart, I am proud of me being over smart! nice...like it

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Hazel Durham 27 January 2015

So original with amazing imagery written with a deep passion that shines with the sparkle of nature!

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 January 2015

A Fantastic flow of words. Beautiful romantic poem written with passion in heart..... Loved reading it.

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Sarmad Mirza 26 January 2015

An amazing poem just loved it......: -)

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Bisma Mirza 26 January 2015

Once again Amazing poem......... Great 10 on 10...

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Valsa George 25 January 2015

Very romantic and sweepingly passionate! ' I like a moon's glimpse in the clouds'........ A very suggestive picture! Enjoyed much!

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Khalid Saifullah 25 January 2015

An amazing and stylish description of nature's appeals.....................10

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