Thursday, October 16, 2014

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Rating: 4.5

I awoke this morning wondering whether
you will finally accept me.

I saw you on the transit system and
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Jeremy Horsford
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Mihaela Pirjol 10 May 2015

The scene and the emotional intensity are vividly captured; so real and palpable! And the last three lines...you can almost feel the speaker's pain in its melancholic tone. A sad and absolutely beautiful poem!

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