James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Saturday, November 7, 2009

Over And Over And Over Comments

Rating: 5.0

You talk about I love it coming back
and when it ever, never should it must.
That rage within, upon my brow it grows.
From each vow I gave, you threw them back.
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Tsira Goge 07 November 2009

The magic blood deep rivers flowed................ ............................................................. IIP, so touching lines... From rich imagination too cry - poets...10......

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Tai Chi Italy 07 November 2009

Mmmmmm sounds like a highly inspiring read iip! There are trims in there too close together for my liking, but over all, it poem sings when read out loud, tongue wrapping poetry. So you have green fingers too huh? Smiling at you Tai

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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