Sunday, November 1, 2009

Over And Over Comments

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Wondering why im still where I started
complaining about the hard things
felling to see its only challenging me
but its getting so plain
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Kranthi Pothineni 16 November 2009

The mark of a successful man is one that has spent an entire day on the bank of a river without feeling guilty about it. ~ Chinese Philosopher

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 01 November 2009

Don’t sit around criticism Don’t sit around mess Because that rubs off on you And stop you from getting to your blessing Because I truly have big dreams I think the last stanza of your own poem gives you the guidelines to overcome the things you are confused about. All you need is a little bit of self-determination and you will get your blessings. Best Wishes

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