Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Over A Piece Of Bread Comments

Rating: 5.0

Over a piece of bread
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Fair was the sky
Cold was the morn
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Salini Nair 05 December 2014

presented it in an amazing way...like it

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Piyush Dey 05 December 2014

Simple and touching. Keeps you hooked to the end. Good write.

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Valsa George 05 December 2014

I could so well visualize the scene! You have described it wirth such lucidity and flow! Enjoyed much!

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Akhtar Jawad 03 December 2014

Impressive and heart touching............10

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