Saturday, May 23, 2009

Outta My Head Comments

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if only i could find the right words to express
deep inside my soul screams distress
and in the midst of all the chaotic flow
my mind just lets go
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Eli Unknown
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Bright Rose 24 May 2009

once again your lovely well penned words captured my attention, you are so creative and gifted, great poem from a great poet :)

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Dislocated Heart 23 May 2009

Amazing poem........ I can relate on so many levels... reality hits.. when you open your eyes in the morning.. first touch of the floor.. you start running.. Beautiful poem! Keep Writing.

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