Wednesday, April 13, 2016

Outstanding Daddy Comments

Rating: 5.0

We were the planets in an orbit
You were the sun my daddy but quit
We all suffocate to fall
You gave deep chasm by your sudden crawl
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v.m.saraswathy munuswamy
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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2016

We lost you the treasure in greedy! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Daddy my super hero, love u and miss you, thanks EKL to understand my inner feel, love but take care, thanks

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 April 2016

A beautifully conceived glowing tribute to an outstanding dad. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks you received it well

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