Friday, September 21, 2012

Outspoken Comments

Rating: 3.8

A fragile bird sings strong,
Despite that those who believe it's flawed
Can mute its voice by force,
Because the silence's pain is worse,
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Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski
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Payal Parande 23 September 2012

really amazing, a phenomenal write indeed, i told you i'll love it and i did thank you for sharing love payal

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Poetheart Morgan 22 September 2012

No one can mute the voice of poet even by force! ! ! And you are a Poetess, Well done! ! !

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Margaret Haig 22 September 2012

Great choice of words and we can into. Behind the story try to add a few more verses, when I learnt theory of music you write poetry then put it to music, and the teacher taught me a good poem has a few stanzas or verses, to build on. But still great work. 95/100

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Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Springfield, MA
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