Outside The Tumbler! Comments

Beautiful poem with deep meaning. Very true said in few lines..... Frills and fringes are defiant That breaks norms on the way Long run is still in the queue There mud that wrinkle the lucid sometimes river is muddy, When its calm its clear and lucid....loved the imagery you used in this poem....

Very insightful, aspects of life narrated very beautifully......phenomenal write.......I liked it

A very philosophic poem that appears as a chapter of a book of ethics. The straight path of eternity has many frills and fringes on each side of the road but behind the this beauty is a slope that leads to mud.