Monday, May 22, 2023

Outside The Lines Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I was young…working with crayons…no matter the design…
my teacher was adamant…when it came to coloring…one must stay within the lines.

And I tried to color her way…the way she comprehended…
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Jim Yerman
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M. Asim Nehal 23 May 2023

You cannot limit your imagination, nor can you confine yourself to a specific boundaries.

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M. Asim Nehal 23 May 2023

Yeah, I agree with discipline one should get creative freedom to express self, you poem touches that part smartly. Full Stars.

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2023

Traits like love, kindness or compassion can not be restricted within boundaries.Let them broaden.Such a lovely poem, thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2023

Imbued with love and compassion, you see art in a different perspective.

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2023

Very inspiring poem.Let me quote -'but I'd also have blank papers and ask them to draw and color things like happiness..and love.'

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