Saturday, January 30, 2016

Outside My Window Xxv Comments

Rating: 5.0

One tuft of snow
one fragile patch
all that's left
of January's rout -
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Frank Avon
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Kelly Kurt 31 January 2016

I am sorry to hear of your pain, Frank. I hope February is a better month and you can open your blinds to a more scenic view. The poem was raw and powerful. I don't think I have seen this in your work before. Still evocatively descriptive. Peace

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 January 2016

A most touching sentiments narrated through a beautifully penned poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Frank Avon 30 January 2016

The penultimate line should be indented to align with blasts. PH won't let me indent.

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