Saturday, October 28, 2017

Outside My Heart Comments

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The door was closed when death arrived
The smiles all gone, no time to borrow
Better had the end come quickly
Than fill the home with days of sorrow
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Chris Embrick
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Qiniso Mogale 28 October 2017

À great poem. The door was closed when death arrived. À masterpiece

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2017

Beautiful poem on life and death with touching expression. I quote... Outside the morning, sunny bright The yard filled with Summer blossoms And on the petals tears of night As I looked outside my heart Felt on my cheek the last tear fall Peace filled my soul with Nature's beauty Knowing that life goes on beyond these walls. Thank you for sharing.

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