Outside And Locked In (Thought) Comments

Hi Poet of the River! (Nice title!) :) I enjoyed this write, as well as several of your others... You have talent... I will enjoy watching you grow with it. Nice Ink! ; -) -Kelly.

I really like the rhyme in this, the title gives it away both free and enslaved, living with the value of being able to do so much but restricted by collective ennui. The message is Universal

the last two lines stand out beautifying the poem....