Saturday, December 2, 2017

Outside Comments

Rating: 5.0

The land of my past is ruined
Away to a foreign shore
I'm thrown, like a leaf,
Got through it.
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Galina Italyanskaya
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C F 06 March 2019

Stunning write on the lot of the refugees... a very beautiful and soulful poem. The phrasing and images evoked are very very vivid.

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 December 2017

Hi Galina, Very touching write. You have captured the heartbeats of the the displaced, the destitutes. Their sorrow, helplessness, nostalgia and loneliness you have expressed in so little, but very powerful words. Very Poignant. Such thoughts can come from only a very loving and caring heart. My home, That's where my heart belonged. But now they are both on fire, And I'm outside, Alone. A proud 100++

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 December 2017

A soft and delicate thought from a nice heart, Galina. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 December 2017

Galina, such a touching poem👍👍👍

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Galina Italyanskaya 02 December 2017

Thank you for reading and for the kind words, Bernard!

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