Friday, May 4, 2012

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Rating: 4.5

Here we are
Back again
Same time same place
All over again
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darkness reigns
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Ronn Michael Salinas 15 November 2012

I like it, the way your writing seemed to loop when you repeated the first lines Here we are/ Back again... It's good :)

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