Thursday, July 25, 2019

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A flesh fly was out casted
by his tribe
for he was seen perched
on the brim of a dish
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
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Edward Kofi Louis 27 July 2019

Mast, cast! Last hope; Oh society! Seeing the ways of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Excellent poem written with such precision and good choice of words that sends a strong message to the society we live in, Dear Poet, you are absolutely right. We live in a stinking, dirty and decaying environment....... A full score for this poem.........10

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Soibam Pramodini Devi 26 July 2019

The analogy is a petty thief if caught is treated as untouchable by the thieves who are not yet caught and living prestigious lives and in a corrupt society many thieves flock to steal from the corrupt offices like flesh flies perch on wounds and stinky garbage etc.The poem reflects the atmosphere of the society he lives..

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