Thursday, June 21, 2018

Outburst Comments

Rating: 4.3

Things do not come to me
as they come to you
as through a door
opened to let in the morning light.
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aditi ray
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 August 2018

Poised and calm, you like a clean tablet, take first impressions every time. Then outflow it in matter for the soul or the mind...love and relationship pictured in a philosophical way...... thank u for your creative mind. a fine poem indeed.. tony

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Crayon Poet 14 August 2018

Your skill is clean.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 14 July 2018

A simple varied outburst. Keep it up

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Aditi Ray 13 August 2018

Thanks Abhimanyu!

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Ha we 21 June 2018

Pi..ss.s off today hey hey

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