Outbreak. Comments

you caught the desperation and fear so vividly in this piece, well done

Poignant, Faye, and all the moreso with Allie and Jerry over there. Still haunted by the stories / eye witness accounts of the firefighters in the World Trade Centres heading up the stairwells as the buildings were about to fall. Such are called to bravery every day... I wonder how I would cope with that choice knowing the consequence of getting it wrong................ Tony

A fine tribute Fay, one can only imagine the depth of horror in Melbourne at this time. Kind regards Ann

Well done Fay, great piece to brave men.10 Tom

Well my brother is there, talked to him on the the phone today, great work Fay...10

A terrible tragedy Fay, your tribute to the firefighters in Australia is good, well said my friend, Lynda xx 10

True and good tribute to our friends in Australia, our prayers and thoughts are with them 10 +++++ Chris

Fay, Good support...10... /thank you/ Tsira

This is a great tribute to those that risk their lives to save ours…really enjoyed the read. Scott

An excellent tribute to the brave men of the fire services Fay...thanks for this...Fi..10++

Brave souls as these should be Remembered, not just today But always - just to see Them fighting in this way. Fire breaks out, - they're there. Firefighters care.....Very true...they are the timely savers...infact gods...very good poem10