Out Walking – Among Nature And Poetry Comments

Lori, this is how I've felt - are you in my head? Observation, revelation, more - I love this poem. You're the real deal.

I think we all desire to calmly and pleasantly enter eternity.

a rare moment to absent the soul from torture which churns on and on at every street corner and drift into drifting even though seated on ancient wood once filled with water sun pure living and THAT has entered and once that has happened every moment is totally the moment free from time yet bound in time no contradiction only the blessing a fine poem

Lori your expression is beautiful.....I feel I have been to his very spot! It's moments like these, when time looses time..and we are captured in all that is glorious interconnectedness....we are plugged in....Robert Frost knew...to take the road less travelled by, often brings us to richer, more wonderous experiences. You have portrayed this very essence, right here in this poem! It's Lovely~

What is this life if full of care, We have no time to stand and stare? - or in your case sit. Nice contemplative poem. I love the line 'Clouds more like commas slid toward tomorrow'