Sunday, October 14, 2012

Out There ..... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Out there, deep in cyberspace,
Breathing out in bits and bytes
Through the ether there we go
You and me as flashing lights
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Valerie Dohren
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Pam Crane 17 January 2014

Oh, how topical and poignant, Valerie! ... yet, through the invisible, from screen to screen, our words and souls are able to meet each other.

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Lyn Paul 29 October 2012

Such a great poem. What will we be like in another 10 years. Scary, Thank you

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Mark Dillon 28 October 2012

Wittyb and well composed Val, enjoyed it tvm.

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John Brown 27 October 2012

One of those 'hee hee' kind of poems. I like it Val.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 19 October 2012

Ah yes d software internet age! A fabulous poem in flow n rhymin. D line of sealed kiss envelopes is remarkable in showin d replacement.

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Tom Higgins 18 October 2012

Nice piece of thought translation, and how relevant Valerie. Keep up the very good work!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 18 October 2012

Internet is an useful medium if it is used for good purpose! Nice to read!

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Walterrean Salley 17 October 2012

A great reminder of the times in which we now live. And no matter how convenient, I won't forget the former hands-on times.

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Valsa George 16 October 2012

Very true! With our eyes closely shut against the actual realities around, we are glued to the virtual reality, you and I alike without exception! A splendid write!

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Dave Walker 15 October 2012

I got converted to the internet by my daughter, before then If I wanted to see something I would go have a look, these days if I want to see something I just click the internet. A great poem.

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Hans Vr 14 October 2012

Wow, so true, Valerie. I still enjoy so much flipping through pictures or even more so if they are nicely ordered in an album. Nothing like the real thing. And then your finale stanza, like grand finale. So true, let us search our soul more often and we will find the treasure inside. This is a great piece of poetry, A super ten

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Danny Draper 14 October 2012

A poem for the times, but letters we can still pen even if only now and then, not for pace or novelty, but as craft and lovingly to see the hand in unique font and smell for hint of perfumes want that some cared enough to print and post and go out of their way to set the snail mail on its way. The unexpected surprise and thrill to find correspondence amongst the bills, a flower in a field of weeds a glimmer in that precious seed that says not all need be said at lightning speed, and can be held to touch and read, and know that although there is a faster way, someone cared to take some time, for you, from the growing celerity of each passing day.

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Heather Wilson 14 October 2012

It`s all on the internet I am told, a wonderful write.

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Neela Nath Das 14 October 2012

So relevant! Your write is keeping pace with time! Lovely Ma'am.

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Smoky Hoss 14 October 2012

a moving comment on our times; well done!

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