Thursday, June 8, 2006

Out Of Your Mind Comments

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Sometimes there are things that just have to change
When you're swimming upstream in your life
Your head keeps on banging that hard cement wall
Till it just doesn't work anymore
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Linda Ori
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Barry Van Allen 17 March 2007

Linda, You DO know that the head is not going to win against the wall ... right? SO, if you decide on flight ... fly far enough away! B.V.A.

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Not a member No 4 20 January 2007

This one is a cousin of Enlightenment I'd guess, but goes straight for the jugular - seems to spring more from frustration than the contemplation which produced Enlightenment, but is no less effective for that. Another little pearl of wisdom from that powerful mind. xx jim

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Brian Dorn 21 June 2006

Linda, a very motivational write... simply inspiring. Nicely done! ! Brian

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Nimal Dunuhinga 15 June 2006

A great notion! like ripples.........the ups & downs of life........the hard task is swimming upstream?

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Charles M Moore 10 June 2006

An inspiring poem with well thought out feelings of regret of lost time and hope for the future.

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LINDA...A WONDERFULLY CRAFTED WORK, ... A GREAT PHILOSOPHY FOR HADLING LIFES PEAKS & VALLEYS...SOMETIMES YA JUST GOTTA WING IT! ''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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