Out Of Touch. Comments

10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

The gulls, like shadows, have flown. Emptiness only remains. Our song too seems to have blown away.- - -stunning

10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++= for this very well written poem

another stunning write-vivid verbs, well-chosen adjectives, tone not over-done- -just perfect

Love's like a tide! it ebbs and it flows it gives and it takes, its highs and its lows! the seagulls still there, but not twenty four hours he needs sleep, and time, to smell the flowers