Out Of Time And Mind Comments
You walk down the street in your fancy suit
Diamonds and gold to show off your fruit
When riches and fame are your primary goals
You give up your soul at the crossing roads
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I am trying to imagine this place 'out of time and mind'. It sounds like a magical place beyond everything. A space to find sanctuary in. A curious poem that made me think.10/10.
'Come let us sail out of time and mind' wonderful poem with an excellent message. We can only live in present moment and present moment holds all. Past is gone, future not arrived, so lets live Now!
Interesting piece - great imagery and a nice easy rhyming and flow. Well done! Linda : -)
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7/18/2025 12:23:46 PM # 1.0.0
Yes, another good one. Like your rhythm, I might make one suggestion: in the second line of the third stanza, add an s after the apostrophe. I think you may feel the difference. Adeline