Sunday, September 15, 2013

Out Of Time! Comments

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The Moon was rising, over the hill
Along with the evening star,
They lit the lane he was walking, ‘til
He could see the lights of a car,
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David Lewis Paget
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Pradip Chattopadhyay 16 September 2013

another brilliant story-in-a-poem from David!

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 15 September 2013

Like a horror story the narration makes us to go through though a long poem.

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Noreen Carden 15 September 2013

Hello David what a wonderful story wrapped up in a brilliant poem. It took me back in time to when my father s friend would come to our house and he would recite all these epic tales i remember one was called The green eye of the little yellow god.Thank you for bringing me back to happy day s.Great poem well done

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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