Saturday, July 9, 2005

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Only one eye remained.
Though she was calm
and did not seem to worry
about the loss at all.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Anong All 09 July 2005

Your poem grabs ahold of the reader, and doesn't let go. Nicely wrote..

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Kelly Allen Vinal 09 July 2005

Most excellent! Very moving piece

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 09 July 2005

very moving and sad. Good job

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Ronberge . 09 July 2005

And...Cut to commercial. Good one Herbert. Sincerely Ronberge.

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