Monday, April 7, 2008

Out Of The Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The singer sang a soft refrain,
standing so still out in the rain.
With such emotion she did sing
to whom this song, did appertain.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 14 March 2009

Just beautiful Ernestine, loved the unusual structure too. Love, Andrew xx

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Duncan Wyllie 20 April 2008

Captivating lines Ernestine, my favourite part: As peaceful as a lullaby, her voice rose up and touched the sky. Gentle on both the heart and mind, like a freed bird, her notes did fly. WOW! Love duncan X

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Abha Sharma 10 April 2008

softly soothing romantic and musical treat.....liked it..

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Lynda Robson 07 April 2008

A lovely melodic piece with wonderful imagery as always,10 for this, Lynda xx

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Debora Short 07 April 2008

There is a delightful and lovely imagery threaded with a powerful Christ-like love and a sweet melodious read to this penning, Ernestine. Great penning! Blessings, Debora

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David Harris 07 April 2008

Ernestine, sparkling imagery with beautiful poem. It reminded of the old musical Singing In The Rain. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David

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David Desantis 07 April 2008

really good imagery, i wish we could all find bliss like the lucky man you write of

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