The singer sang a soft refrain,
standing so still out in the rain.
With such emotion she did sing
to whom this song, did appertain.
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Captivating lines Ernestine, my favourite part: As peaceful as a lullaby, her voice rose up and touched the sky. Gentle on both the heart and mind, like a freed bird, her notes did fly. WOW! Love duncan X
A lovely melodic piece with wonderful imagery as always,10 for this, Lynda xx
There is a delightful and lovely imagery threaded with a powerful Christ-like love and a sweet melodious read to this penning, Ernestine. Great penning! Blessings, Debora
Ernestine, sparkling imagery with beautiful poem. It reminded of the old musical Singing In The Rain. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David
really good imagery, i wish we could all find bliss like the lucky man you write of
Just beautiful Ernestine, loved the unusual structure too. Love, Andrew xx