Tuesday, December 16, 2008

Out Of The Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

She walks the street late at night
a lost child without a home
looking for a way out of the darkness.
She had ran away from the life she had before
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Pearl L Johns
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Carl Harris 16 December 2008

This is a very poignant and powerful free style poem, Pearl, one very effectively written. Your well chosen words painted a stark scene of modern life so vividly that the reader can feel the pain in it. It is a great example of what poetry is all about. Carl.

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Tiffany Sunshine 16 December 2008

Your poem touched me.One thing I believe that make a good poet is that they take reality and put it in the art form of words and in this poem you have done that.

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Mike Riley Lindsey 16 December 2008

WOW! GREAT! THIS ONE SHOULD BE POPULAR.

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