* Out Of The Box * Comments

Maybe you can write again...after so many years....I still wait for..your poetry

Hi... Although this poem is simple, it does have a deep meaning - so lovely poem...

A very intelligent write and spectacular closure.

poem ends with a need that is power for any action.......meaningful and marvellous

Filled with a much insight..truths..i like it^^

simple, but meaningful.....

Simple but to a fundamental point well done!

A good simple way to describe a problem that has faced man for a long time. You can certainly take elements of this for future poems.

Good luck on that on Sulaiman. Separating the rich from their gold is like driving trucks without wheels. It doesn't happen too much and it doesn't go to far from home. It might be plain to you but it certainly isn't simple for them. a poet friend.. RH PEAT

cool¡ Caind of Humorous, i really like it¡ jaja. You really can wright¡

The title's ironic.

rich and poor vary in needs but only the amount varies rich need big amount while poor needs less.... what matters most? ...money.....o, don't question my words here my SMY...winners are rewarded, ranks will tell what to win.......aaaaaaaaaa....my dear, do u think this poem is a simple one? ..no, it is complicated since many poetic are seen here in abstract details....u can delet this anytime if it sounds not gud....smileeeeeeeeeeeeeee

so bright is the illusion of man's treasure....a poem of fully loaded with reflection...denuded by total surrender of quest....very beautiful poem... God bless...a 10 +++

his is one sad, but realistic view of our world. If you have money, you can... Don't let me even start counting. It is beautyful. Bravo!

It brings itself to a short and simple point there is such a fine line between success and failure And it is true sometimes you can move mountains with money. but i guess it depends on the mountain. I like it Lauren

To move a mountain You need money A plain simple I don't think that it's a plain simple, Sulaiman, but it's your opinion and you are successful to make your point.

i agree with you but a little faith goes a long way; i'm still out of the box with you

like for certain things, money can buy it, but not all. its a good poem with a huge meaning behind it...

such small but so meaning ful poem very good.

modern day mover Sulaiman, it really is