Monday, April 15, 2013

Out Of The Blue Comments

Rating: 4.5

It races along not a care in the world
Like an old schooner mainsails unfurled
Up top all is calm, little too calm perhaps
Then it starts to unravel and fears a collapse
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steven mitchell
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David Wood 15 April 2013

A lovely poem that rhymes well. I have a similar poem, I Dreamed A Dream.

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Gajanan Mishra 15 April 2013

waves of panic. good poem. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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