Tuesday, January 2, 2007

Out Of The Abyss Comments

Rating: 5.0

The trap door opened.
I fell into the pit.

After ten days,
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COMMENTS
Declan McHenry 02 January 2007

Max, we are not worthy! The struggle to make sense continues. I am 'minded of a quote, the source of which I do not know, 'One should seek to live an ordinary life in an extraordinary fashion.'

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Tailor Bell 02 January 2007

reality versus illusion, responsibility to the day and responsibility to sanity...the toil and repreve. wow, this is ultra familiar subject in completely novel style. superb work, Max. -Tailor

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Alice Vedral Rivera 02 January 2007

Such a personal and sincere expression of something we all struggle with periodically - acceptance. Sometimes we do not recognize the manifestation of our desires as they are not in the form we anticipated them to be. avr

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That step back, Max, is the... the 'something'. This is a personal. wonderful piece to read. The ending in particular (well, you know) . I am grateful. t x

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