The feeling evoked is out of space and out of time. In starkness I am comforted by *Ferry light with you*... The shifting pronouns (from I to You) could be resolved by converting them all to We / Us - more collective, and consistent. I love this poem.
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The feeling evoked is out of space and out of time. In starkness I am comforted by *Ferry light with you*... The shifting pronouns (from I to You) could be resolved by converting them all to We / Us - more collective, and consistent. I love this poem.