Monday, February 4, 2019

Out Of Sight Out Of Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

I made you unimportant everywhere
deleted from the history and pages
so hopefully so soon i wouldn't care
for days, for months and whole amount of ages
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Veronika Bitkina
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C F 12 March 2019

Very well written poem on unreciprocated love, I can feel the longing and frustration leading up to a sad goodbye.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 February 2019

I'm so affraid to meet your eyes.. and fall in love.. and you won't care. i am not so special. running away. love and its problems and emotions. thank u dear potess. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 February 2019

wow amazingly penned the HATE uttered stanza; by reading it seems to me your hate is pure love/// lovely poem, beautiful poetic expression 10++++++

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