Saturday, February 2, 2013

Out Of Shell Comments

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Out of shell, fully hatched empty handed
propitiating goodness; robe pinkish spotless.
Black spots commence controlling the crown
directing body to crave for pleasures mean
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Tribhawan Kaul
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Shahzia Batool 03 February 2013

A strong work against the seven deadly sins, a sermon from the pulpit of poetry...compact and condensed diction with the game of words you played so substantially, see the lines: Kill kill kill. Be the hunter not the hunted. Kill kill kill. The satanic senses within you. Let flower of anti-desire bloom spreading its fragrance granting boon, “be a homely saint not for unworthy worldly gains”. regards

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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