Out Of Self Prison Comments

Wow DJ liked the flow of your poem, self motivation is the only way to overcome the obstacles. Well done

The flight on hope's feather! ! ! ! Being very courageous. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Now she is far from being weathered Her personality and character gelled together She took the flight on hope's feather With pride the lost dignity is gathered....Fantastic! ! ! !

Life of fairer is very difficult. They go thru many emotional turmoil and at times they need love and at times they need care.

2) As I gave comment here you created a magnificent poem about a woman, I admit if you have taken a male person, the whole drama-point, what makes the poem exiting, will disappear, but why a crow? It rhymes very well with the above end words, but a crow.....? My comment for this gorgeous poem is still the same: a magnificent one, but as I said: a crow is a bad omen. Or shall she turn again in a disgraceful soul? Thank you for sharing this brilliant read, Asim Sir

the words, content and problems suit very well to a woman, but why for heaven's sake, dear Asim Sir, to end with the crow? This poem tells the reader that she has got that final feeling: finally free from her own prison, but the crow is a bad omen and symbolizing the darkest places in life.

No more she is a disgraceful soul now! She gained maturity without being old, how? Beauty and appeal together, Wow? She is out from the self-prison like a crow....interesting.... I enjoyed

One always needs to gather courage to come out of self prison. A thoughtful poem.

The determination to conquer the hard balls thrown in life's path will free us from the bondage of hardships and fear. A wonderful poem well crafted. Very uplifting.10++