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your poetry is awesome! ! ! there is not one false step in this remarkable piece of writing! ! ! !

before the morning settles in a wedge of space wafer thin not visible to eye but the heart to an ordinary day what a start.... wow.......nice write ageless Fay

In dreams they are together, unbridled passion flowing eyes only for each other, a storm inside them growing whisked away to the isle of love, no greater place to be for through the daylight hours, I too think of thee lovely Fay

I can feel your passion in this poem. Very expressive and well done! : -)

a feeling of longing excellently expressed fay............

fay an absolute great write love in lovely verse

I loved this one Fay. Such meaning and care keenly tempered and carefully crafted into such a lovingly prepared poem. You've inspired me to put my love poem on 'Dawns Fist Light' Best Regards Steve

A tale of such longing Fay, I know so well at the moment.. Andy 10