Sunday, May 31, 2009

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The purple cyclamens bloom.
She's not there to tend them:
They grow awry
Not cultivated as before.
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Lesley Merrin
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Kim Davies 04 April 2010

Oh what a very sad glimpse of life; the colourful, bustling garden thriving, life going, on whilst her presence has ceased, her own life fading. This is life, life does go on, but you have used the juxtaposion beautifully - I really feel the loss....

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Sean Williams 01 April 2010

I really admire the way you've combined such rich imagery and vivid colours with a moving sense of pathos/melancholia.

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John Fieldson 19 February 2010

such beautiful words and imagery - perfect 10+

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Sara Tehrani 04 June 2009

So deep, elegant and endearing. lovely read. :)

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