Sunday, December 17, 2017

Out Of Our Hands Comments

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We hold onto Things, as crutches,
Wanting pain to disappear
Our life-tree has its notches
Where Destiny carves its own spheres.
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Sandra Feldman
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Feipeng Shang 21 December 2017

Quite often, things are out of our hands Yet are all in God's hands

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Jette Blackstone 18 December 2017

Your poem speaks of the challenges of being human. We hold onto things that really have no value compared to each other. In our humanity, we remain forever vulnerable until we are no more. More of Sandra's poetic wisdom! Thanks sis!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 December 2017

A beautifully crafted write about life. It strongly conveys the uncertainty of the future. Great piece.10

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