Out Of My Life Comments

nice poem i liked the part about the crazy glue lol

Oh wow! ! Its straight from the heart! ! I am new on poem-hunter, please check my poem called Life: a token free rollercoaster too!

SNAP! very energetic. i like how u used a single line for some of the words. it gives that word much more emphasis than capitalizing it and makes the reader spot that word immediately. ur poem is very real

this is such a good poem so much power with your words speechless as a little mouse wait i am a mouse lol you have power behind every word you say

Very powerful...powerful poems are nice :)

A brave attempt and an extraordinary work, good thought good flow…narrated in free verse, nice, a great work.

i like it but the ryme seem to fade whne u start this can't believe you would do something like that then it got a little more personal......then at the last few lines you started ryming again......i like it, shows how you felt

This masterpiece should be turned into a slam, it would rock! #i love it