Friday, August 14, 2009

Out Of Hurting Comments

Rating: 5.0

Out of hurting, I had build
Something that resembles the Berlin wall
Now you are here…
I have been reluctant
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Kefentse Sathekge
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Wendy Thopliss 18 February 2011

So sad, if only you could find the courage to end this war by pulling down the wall. you never know there could be happiness behind it. Nice read.

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Nomthinjana Lusiti 19 August 2009

Hey buddy, nice and short...you are now at a stage of being careful and the war will continue until you really let go! ! Nice piece though, poetry is about pouring out your inner feeling and you did just that.. Zoe 10+

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Nomthinjana Lusiti 19 August 2009

Hey buddy, nice and short...you are now at a stage of being careful and the war will continue until you really let go! ! Nice piece though, poetry is about pouring out your inner feeling and you did just that.. Zoe 10+

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