Tuesday, August 2, 2016

Out Of Fear! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dark wind and the ruffling leaves,

The howling mongrels at the corner streets,
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Nirmala Kanagasabapathy
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Jazib Kamalvi 02 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Nirmala. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Akram Mohamed 03 August 2016

Beautiful words that smoothly blends; Congrats on penning this one, my dear friend!

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:) :) :)

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Menato San 03 August 2016

Amazing piece.Nice work. Thanks for sharing

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Thanks Menato :)

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Chinedu Dike 02 August 2016

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely encapsulated in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely poem insightfully brought forth. Thanks for sharing Nirmala.

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Thanks Chinedu. That was so encouraging :)

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Kelly Kurt 02 August 2016

Your first posted poem is wonderful, Nirmala. I hope to see more Peace

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Thanks Kelly :)

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 02 August 2016

Nice hallucinatory picture excellently crafted accurately placing aptly chosen phases, takes us through a series of scenes in a horror film. Well done Nirmala. Lets have more of the kind. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks Jayatissa :)

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