*out Of Eden Comments

WELL written! ....i am impressed by this one.even though you seem to be blasphemously endorsing what was deemed a grand misdemeanor on the part of man.; ->

I love good writing and I love philosophy and I love this. I gave it a 10. GW62

glad there's no mention of sin!

A metaphor for the writings emitted out of Man's brain with ever new sense who so ever reads...the first stanza is quite meaningful.... Thoughts cowered covered in fig leaves of words Stripped of their Naked Majesty................thought provoking...on the birth of writing.... **Abha**

Total absence of explanation 'The ultimate truth' No need to prove No need to cover No need to pen down Meant to be told With one’s own self.

Interesting write. The truth will out in the end? Is that the message? Grand imagery. HG: -) xx