Friday, December 19, 2014

Out-Of-Body Experience Comments

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Sometimes I scrutinize this bedsit:
shoes and runners pointing in different directions on floor;
red jacket strewn across arm of sofa;
an unmade bed, the sheets tossed about and ruffled from torturous sleep;
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Colm Keenan
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 May 2016

o survey the innocence of movement, of purpose, of threads that unravel into one big knot. there is a ghost here...... so many who are engaged in eostherics say about an out.of body experience. some believe it, some do not......... so is it..... thank you for this good poem which gives notions which are different than normal. tony

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Colm Keenan 13 May 2016

Tony, thanks for such an insightful critique.

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