Out Of Body Experience Comments

While I have never had an out-of-body experience, your dazzling poem shows me clearly what it could be like. Your imagination is running free, getting every reader's attention.

Simply Magnificent, Prabir...10+++++

A wonderful and one of a kind write that takes us to the realm of nothingness. Poignant yet beautiful poem. Superb imagery.

(2) Out of body (or for that matter 'out of this world') experience is a figurative way of expressing one's feelings. The concept of astral travel is there but cannot be substantiated. Thanks for this philosophical piece.

The forest of life crushed with drought, rivers are flowing with no water and Life is gone and death is sleeping I am a foreigner... to my body mind and being chaotic... hollow and empty.... //.... With this kind of portrayal, life can only be seen as a burden or a torture and not a blessing of the God Almighty.

Transcendental state - nicely written. and clouds are floating around in the sky of my heart and my mind hollow and empty,

A poem of rare beauty!

Prabir, very nice! nice read.. Photo adds to the poem. I rate a 10.