Never did anyone on me some tricks
As it will always first strike
My mind may start working
I was fortunate to have it as liking
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Cooper John8 minutes ago Hard to follow at times but a discernable feeling is there. Comment 0 Like it
Excellent, but needs rhythm Aimee LaFon12 minutes ago Great content, lacks rhythm and flow. Or to say it better, lacks unity. Comment 0 Last paragraphs seem to be out of context
Dorielyn Sta. Cruz12 minutes ago Poem was talking about a woman, but death suddenly in the 2 paragraphs towards the end. Or is woman = death?
Never did anyone on me some tricks As it will always first strike
beautiful Daina Smitley10 minutes ago a beautiful love story that I thought seemed kind of incomplete, like a cliff hanger.