Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, September 3, 2013

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Never did anyone on me some tricks
As it will always first strike
My mind may start working
I was fortunate to have it as liking
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

beautiful Daina Smitley10 minutes ago a beautiful love story that I thought seemed kind of incomplete, like a cliff hanger.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

Cooper John8 minutes ago Hard to follow at times but a discernable feeling is there. Comment 0 Like it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

Nicki Jennings11 minutes ago Very confusing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

Excellent, but needs rhythm Aimee LaFon12 minutes ago Great content, lacks rhythm and flow. Or to say it better, lacks unity. Comment 0 Last paragraphs seem to be out of context

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

Dorielyn Sta. Cruz12 minutes ago Poem was talking about a woman, but death suddenly in the 2 paragraphs towards the end. Or is woman = death?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

Never did anyone on me some tricks As it will always first strike

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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