Wednesday, March 26, 2008

Out Of Africa Comments

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Written by: Wilfred C. Mellers Sunday, January 27,2002

Out of paradise where I'm from
Taken down to a little island
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Michael Pruchnicki 26 March 2008

Interesting poem but it needs a little polishing to make it shine! Concentrate on concrete images what are simple tools in our hands? all nations bowed before us>? sweet garden home of paradise? why not gardens of Eden? see what I mean?

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Wilfred Mellers

Wilfred Mellers

Kinston, Jamaica, West Indies
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