Interesting poem but it needs a little polishing to make it shine!
Concentrate on concrete images
what are simple tools in our hands?
all nations bowed before us>?
sweet garden home of paradise?
why not gardens of Eden?
see what I mean?
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Interesting poem but it needs a little polishing to make it shine! Concentrate on concrete images what are simple tools in our hands? all nations bowed before us>? sweet garden home of paradise? why not gardens of Eden? see what I mean?