Tuesday, May 17, 2022

Out My Office Window Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your steeple is crumbling.
They're stripping crosses to melt
for some return.
The bell is gone from the tower.
...
Read full text

T.R. James Bray
COMMENTS
Smoky Hoss 06 August 2022

Beautiful poem. Life is constantly in the state of change, for better or for worse, time will tell... perhaps just the way it is? Thank you for making me think.

0 0 Reply
LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 May 2022

you touched on the way things are going. I don't like it either Bravo!

1 0 Reply
Richard Wlodarski 17 May 2022

I too watch as these churches are replaced by condominiums. I am intrigued by your last line which appears to be a double entendre. Please correct me if I'm mistaken. Excellent poem, Poet Bray!

2 0 Reply
TRJB 18 May 2022

Thanks Richard, Yes I was trying to express the support the church once had to the new reality of the betrayal.

1 0
Close
Error Success