Thursday, February 15, 2018

Out My League Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stanza: 1
At night I catch myself drifting away in dreams although
It may seem as if I'm coming unhinged at the seams
Nothing could ever replace what you truly mean to me
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Laquory Jones
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Mj Lemon 06 March 2018

A terrific poem, Laquory. What you capture here is the ability of love to make one feel simultaneously empowered and inadequate. Your accomplishment is done with great great skill and artistry.

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